I am scared, I am not prepared.
I can't see light, I don't feel right.
When I boarded this flight I thought it would be a magnificent sight, to see all of the land below.
Although I am stranded in a few hours we will have landed.
When I boarded this flight I thought it would be a magnificent sight, to see all of the land below.
Although I am stranded in a few hours we will have landed.
Hi Mataio
ReplyDeleteMy name is Allie and I am the cluster manager for the SLJ in Toki Pounamu on the West Coast of the South Island. So I live in Greymouth.
I really enjoyed reading your poem that you have written. I love how you have rhymed the words. they work really well together. You describe you feeling very well. The fact that you are scared but not prepared is just great. It really shows how someone would feel flying into the unknown.
I am really pleased that you will land safely and be feeling much better.
Isn't is amazing that is used to take 14 hours to fly from Australia to New Zealand. Now you can just hop on a plane and be in Aussie in about 2 1/2 hours, you even get to watch a movie and eat a meal.
Have you been in a plane before? If so where did you go?
Well done Mataio I really enjoyed your work!
Until next time
Allie :)
Hello Mataio
ReplyDeleteWell done on finishing this summer learning journey activity. I really like the way you rhymed the words in your poem. My favorite line is 'Although I am stranded in a few hours we will have landed'. Keep up the awesome work Mataio.
Daniel